the right paperwork... yep. reminds me of a place I once worked. They tried telling me that even though It might seem unethical, it was still legal. If I filled out the paperwork correctly I could make lots of money. NO I did not stay there.. I quit that job as quickly as I could. This piece speaks for so many other things than you could include... you could probably write a book.
I would have liked to have seen the idea of 'paper work' continued, that said a lot with little effort, so I feel your following stanzas weren't as strong as your first as they were just stating not providing a clever spin on looking at things, lost your impact or more the potential impact - but none the less I'm glad I stumbled across this - you're definitely my type of writer, thank God people are still moved enough to voice their opinions through what they do, thanks for writing and posting this :)
There are such horrors that pollute the world.. devastate the earth.. our cities. our lives. You profoundly voice the pain that comes with war of all kinds.. Yes.. too often it all comes down to money..
I think everyone on earth should read this poem to know what is happening, whether it's from wars, natural disasters and such.
This poem is a definition to this era.
Wonderful write, keep going :)
the right paperwork... yep. reminds me of a place I once worked. They tried telling me that even though It might seem unethical, it was still legal. If I filled out the paperwork correctly I could make lots of money. NO I did not stay there.. I quit that job as quickly as I could. This piece speaks for so many other things than you could include... you could probably write a book.
You speak correctly about many things that are wrong and we do have many "wars" on paper that we can't see and may not even know the truth about. This is very insightful and eye opening.
I joined Writers Cafe to inspire and be inspired, I hope you are looking for the same. I always review other peoples writing in return for a review (sometimes I am slow) and I look forward to any con.. more..