Proof

Love and civilization...

turbulent love

claws that grasp

frail living heart

converted into machine

locked in a cage

 

you ask for proof

why is a living beating heart

better than a manufactured one?

 

I don't need your questions

theories

science

religion

 

my answer

is to run far away

far from your wrath

 

I taste freedom

feel the ground

on my bare feet

touch the sky

flee to sacred places

 

perception

is freedom

I won't play your game

or live by your rules

I trust my senses

 

I'll take my frail heart

into the wilderness

grow powerful

return to your paved over land

consume your civilization made of madness

I will bring back the wildness

you tried to control

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Love this cause this certainly is how I feel... I don't need an organized religion to tell me how to love God and I don't need "society" to tell me what to like.

perception
is freedom
I won't play your game
or live by your rules
I trust my senses

Awesome verse.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

stunning powerful burt of sunlight inside the soul of a woman who knows the deepest layers of her heart~

I'll take my frail heart

into the wilderness

grow powerful

return to your paved over land

consume your civilization made of madness

I will bring back the wildness

you tried to control



YES! Do it!~ =)~

[shoaib]

wow .. beautiful poem
i love that sense of freedom by getting away from it all
awesome work with this

[Revolutionary]

Wild thing!!!I feel your wrath.I love this poem and wish you could thrust trees thu the concrete and plow earth into tall buildings.I'm with ya girl

[Sweets]

This is so lovely!
I loved the first few lines the most!
Wonderful work! :D

[Rossen]

Swept up by the empowering voice, reminds me of leaving home at fifteen
free to think for myself,
nice write!

[Rohan Tandon]

I really like this... it has a very liberating and revolting feel to it.... U do not agree to be chained down by societies views and that is gr8, somewhat like Madonna and GaGa... two powerful figures who are completely independent.

[Rohan Tandon]

It is extremely liberating. Very powerful and rebelling. Somewhat reminds me of Madonna and GaGa ... a powerful figure who is never dictated by society. Gr8 write. Thanks 4 sharing.

[Star Wolf]

I read this and thought of nature returning to claim what was always hers. A very powerful poem about what nature always does in the end, creeps back to claim the land. Awesome poem.

[Seshat Nidaba]

I like your poetic voice! It's idealistic in the social cause way I value and respect.