Breathe

The breath of inspiration...

Breathe in
books, flowers, people
sky, poetry, trees

bursting with butterflies
hummingbirds
bees

Breathe out
words, poetry, art, conversation
love, smiles, wonder

I only know this fullness of life
breathe in
breathe out

 

Reviews

[wafa]

Brief and musical .... well done, it is like a moment of taking a breathe, that's life a Breathe, that's why when some people ask and you just answer " Iam breathing" it is just "Iam leaving"...
I like something else, you put all inspiring words i like to breathe and breathe out...Thanks for sharing!!!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I love this it is full of happiness and the pure joy of life.
I love the 'breathe ins ' and the 'breathe outs'- this is so positive.
Lovely words.

Chloe

[Another Relic]

A great way to look at life. I think it shows a very positive view on the world around us and the best parts about it. Nice!!!

[Tina Kline]

Very beautiful and inspiring poem, it is so true!

[emmajoy]

And if your poem was a sum of figures and not letters .. the total would be ..
perfection.

[Jibey]

Beautifully constructed and potent in its simple elegance... and in its message

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

life requires balance... one of the biggest is giving and getting to keep the circle of life moving. I am breating in this inspiration.

[Nimbus Thread]

Just what I needed to read today. Thank you...breathing! : 0

[Ed Hart]

touch

[KAREN]

Excellent write! I'm just trying to breathe it all in, and your poem is breath taking!