Brief and musical .... well done, it is like a moment of taking a breathe, that's life a Breathe, that's why when some people ask and you just answer " Iam breathing" it is just "Iam leaving"...
I like something else, you put all inspiring words i like to breathe and breathe out...Thanks for sharing!!!
ah to sit and watch the world breathe as we do - in and out - the breath of poetry - exhaling words - your poems have this kind of "sigh" feel and we just fall into your words! nice!
Excellent! I am in love with this piece!
And if we could indeed breathe all this in and out...what a better world it would be!
This is an amazing poem love, a favourite!
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wow, you just mentioned the best things that keep us motivated!
This short poem reminds the readers of everything they experienced with butterflies, hummingbirds, bees, poetry art ect...
Wonderful work!
Very expressive of what reading, writing, and communicating with people in the world will do for one's life..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Thanks for stopping by...Sunflower
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