Breathe

Breathe

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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The breath of inspiration...

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Breathe in
books, flowers, people
sky, poetry, trees

bursting with butterflies
hummingbirds
bees

Breathe out
words, poetry, art, conversation
love, smiles, wonder

I only know this fullness of life
breathe in
breathe out
 

© 2011 Desert Dreamer


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Brief and musical .... well done, it is like a moment of taking a breathe, that's life a Breathe, that's why when some people ask and you just answer " Iam breathing" it is just "Iam leaving"...
I like something else, you put all inspiring words i like to breathe and breathe out...Thanks for sharing!!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love this it is full of happiness and the pure joy of life.
I love the 'breathe ins ' and the 'breathe outs'- this is so positive.
Lovely words.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A great way to look at life. I think it shows a very positive view on the world around us and the best parts about it. Nice!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very beautiful and inspiring poem, it is so true!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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And if your poem was a sum of figures and not letters .. the total would be ..
perfection.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Beautifully constructed and potent in its simple elegance... and in its message

Posted 13 Years Ago


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life requires balance... one of the biggest is giving and getting to keep the circle of life moving. I am breating in this inspiration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Just what I needed to read today. Thank you...breathing! : 0

Posted 13 Years Ago


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touch

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Excellent write! I'm just trying to breathe it all in, and your poem is breath taking!

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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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