Emerging Ripples
A Poem by
Desert Dreamer
photo inspired....
© 2011 Desert Dreamer
Author's Note
I created the image yesterday using my fingers, finger painting is fun...thank you Poppy for the inspiration.
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This is very interesting. It to me a while, because a lot is said in such a short piece. Ripples reflecting my thoughts. I'm guessing the thoughts are rippling in your mind and mirror the uncertainty of self. Refreshingly, short, compact and worthwhile. Love the imagery by the way
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Sensational...love the image...great wisdom in this piece. Much enjoy this...excellent writing..oh and creative too...
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sensational...love the image...great wisdom in this piece. Much enjoy this...excellent writing..oh and creative too...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Lovely wisdom with inspiring hues...looks like it was fun!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Lovely wisdom with inspiring hues...looks like it was fun!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Even Better!
What's cool is that the colors compliment the Tree Spirit, very calm, green and shadow, swaying and rustling in the afternoon breeze.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Even Better!
What's cool is that the colors compliment the Tree Spirit, very calm, green and shadow, swaying and rustling in the afternoon breeze.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
like reeling me in to your magic, wondering
Posted 13 Years Ago
like reeling me in to your magic, wondering
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Love the drawing... a powerful message within this short piece... we must confront our fears to understand our strengths.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Love the drawing... a powerful message within this short piece... we must confront our fears to understand our strengths.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Outstanding.
I know this place. I am always wondering.
Usually, in those moments when the tree holds one in trance, the following moments make me feel like at best a visitor, at worst, a pest.
I guess I will have to try this finger painting thing.
Well, next time I rent a room with just the right wall......
Posted 13 Years Ago
Outstanding.
I know this place. I am always wondering.
Usually, in those moments when the tree holds one in trance, the following moments make me feel like at best a visitor, at worst, a pest.
I guess I will have to try this finger painting thing.
Well, next time I rent a room with just the right wall......
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
The imagery in this short piece is spectacular. Last line is a very deep thought and beautiful.
Posted 13 Years Ago
The imagery in this short piece is spectacular. Last line is a very deep thought and beautiful.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
beautiful words and image
Posted 13 Years Ago
beautiful words and image
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
oh, beautiful sister, you are a delight
Posted 13 Years Ago
oh, beautiful sister, you are a delight
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
A neat reflective poem... I too like to observe a moment of nature and wonder ... There is something profound about your words, simply and neatly threaded together...
Posted 13 Years Ago
A neat reflective poem... I too like to observe a moment of nature and wonder ... There is something profound about your words, simply and neatly threaded together...
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on February 7, 2011
Last Updated on February 7, 2011
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tree ,
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Desert Dreamer Sonoran Desert, AZ
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