Emerging Ripples

Emerging Ripples

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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photo inspired....

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© 2011 Desert Dreamer


Author's Note

Desert Dreamer
I created the image yesterday using my fingers, finger painting is fun...thank you Poppy for the inspiration.

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This is very interesting. It to me a while, because a lot is said in such a short piece. Ripples reflecting my thoughts. I'm guessing the thoughts are rippling in your mind and mirror the uncertainty of self. Refreshingly, short, compact and worthwhile. Love the imagery by the way

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I didn't know your were an artist as well as a poet. The whole package is colorful and dreamy, and I love that last line. wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I love the creativity of your work: colour, word and form in both. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is very interesting. It to me a while, because a lot is said in such a short piece. Ripples reflecting my thoughts. I'm guessing the thoughts are rippling in your mind and mirror the uncertainty of self. Refreshingly, short, compact and worthwhile. Love the imagery by the way

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I suspect you'd make even a straight line beautiful! You've tied picture to words with true imagination and more ..

' .. and face myself, wondering ' ~ words to think about.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like these "thoughts"-- very captivating!
I've often stared into the current my own self-- "reflecting" and "wondering".
Oh yes, and I love the illustrated format!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely done, I can see the tree reflected in the water, but I can also see you!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An excellent composition of beautiful words and images.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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I love this!! and the picture/painting is brilliant too! oh the reflections in the ripples! nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful image melded with these visually stunning words... There is a depth in the waters that mirrors the depth of your spirit.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Dreamer this makes me dream too...Love finger-painting..
Looks like ripples you could gaze into and see a wondering reflection.
Short with such meaning .. always such a pleasure to read your writings.

Chloe

Love the colors you used. The little purple tint ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 7, 2011
Last Updated on February 7, 2011
Tags: reflection, poetry, tree, water
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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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