This is very interesting. It to me a while, because a lot is said in such a short piece. Ripples reflecting my thoughts. I'm guessing the thoughts are rippling in your mind and mirror the uncertainty of self. Refreshingly, short, compact and worthwhile. Love the imagery by the way
And I was astounded by the image created! Pleasure love...beautiful artwork and the poem is exceptional, full circle and reflective, thought provoking xx
._. This is fantastic!
I clicked this cause I liked the picture and the title, and it turns out that you drew this yourself!
Wonderful work :)
Some more extra practice and you'll hopefully be Da Vinci 2 :)
This sounds rather like someone is being born from the waters of life and upon awareness they are left wondering at themselves, perhaps in awe. I love this one.
Good poem and art work..Very creative idea..I need to do some art work again and forget the world and loose myself in creativity..Your kind review of my work was so encouraging...Sunflower
A creative and lovely piece. The image complements the words well. Your words are subtle yet with the few words you use, they make you think and create a lovely image.
I joined Writers Cafe to inspire and be inspired, I hope you are looking for the same. I always review other peoples writing in return for a review (sometimes I am slow) and I look forward to any con.. more..