Herbal Vision

Herbal Vision

A Poem by Desert Dreamer
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Inspired by the frankincense tree and Poppy's word challenge

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travel the dirt trail

touch the sacred frankincense

endless list of dreams

© 2011 Desert Dreamer


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Desert Dreamer
I am proud to say that I have touched a Frankincense tree and smelled its earthy musky scent....

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The scent of frankincense would lie beautifully with your haiku ..

Because of its scent Frankincense is probably the most cherished of all spices and herbs. Plus, if you were to ask a thousand people to describe it, you'd have a thousand different answers ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Very descriptive and expressive work..Enjoyed reading this morn.Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This is beautiful...enjoyed it tremendously..:)

Peace
Robin

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a soft, tender write that inspires that richness of fragrance mingled with fabled fabrics... I used to have Frankincense oil and would put a few drops on my neck in the morning... the scent has such depth. Beautiful, dreaming words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I love the inspiring title and the wonderful thought of last line...this put me at ease...beautifully done...

Posted 13 Years Ago


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All those different trails that lead to so many dreams... touching the frankincense tree must have been one dream come true for you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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forgot to rate ! zzzz time almost

Posted 13 Years Ago


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I am envious though it is wrong to envy .. But to have touched a Frankincense tree.. how lovely is that? I have only smelled the incense! How sad is that? lol
Down a dirt trail you will find this tree and whosever touches it shall have an endless list of dreams.. such a warm and beautiful three lines.

Chloe

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice Haiku. I closed my eyes and could feel the trail around me... all the things that came to my mind was peace. Frail peace but peace nonetheless.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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finger painting, word painting, soul painting, the touch of your dreams and hands through your words, my lady

Posted 13 Years Ago


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You know I love this one.
So, then you would know if the incense that they make really smells like Frankincense?


Posted 13 Years Ago


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Desert Dreamer
Desert Dreamer

Sonoran Desert, AZ



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