First Flight
A Poem by
Desert Dreamer
Poetry inspired by the photo of a butterfly.
© 2011 Desert Dreamer
Author's Note
Background image by PoppySilver.
Featured Review
I read about butterflies all the time, the subject of many poems.
Now I have read one that has done poetic justice to this marvel .
Not to put down others, just think warming wings in morning sun
made all the difference. Gold dust is too, magic,
Sending children into flight is always in mind- love your work,
Rossen
Posted 14 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Such a wonderful message in this delightful little poem... when ever we take a chance how can you not wonder how others will react or effect them.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Such a wonderful message in this delightful little poem... when ever we take a chance how can you not wonder how others will react or effect them.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
This poem reads like a morning hour launch pad-- leaving the flight or the day up to the reader to create. Incredible impact!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This poem reads like a morning hour launch pad-- leaving the flight or the day up to the reader to create. Incredible impact!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
poetry inspired by metamorphosis
Posted 14 Years Ago
poetry inspired by metamorphosis
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
I remember this image. Poppy always had some that made you think.
I love your thoughts on this image.
You make the butterfly sound beautiful ( which it is)
and ready to take on the world.
I would love to witness the first flight of a butterfly.
Beautiful thoughts.
Chloe
Posted 14 Years Ago
I remember this image. Poppy always had some that made you think.
I love your thoughts on this image.
You make the butterfly sound beautiful ( which it is)
and ready to take on the world.
I would love to witness the first flight of a butterfly.
Beautiful thoughts.
Chloe
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Simply pretty. The words alone form an image and the photo just adds to the beautiful words. Very pretty.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Simply pretty. The words alone form an image and the photo just adds to the beautiful words. Very pretty.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
looks like a tortoise shell butterfly, do you get the swallowtails in your area ?
Posted 14 Years Ago
looks like a tortoise shell butterfly, do you get the swallowtails in your area ?
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Oh how tasteful and so touching.. Your imagery was perfection!
Mags xx
Posted 14 Years Ago
Oh how tasteful and so touching.. Your imagery was perfection!
Mags xx
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
oh, I want to witness the flight . . . lovely words and image
Posted 14 Years Ago
oh, I want to witness the flight . . . lovely words and image
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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