Blue Goddess

A Poem by Desert Dreamer

Dada poetry...

Blue goddess of healing

men for plants
of a breath

I show

to goddess

dreams
hand cedar

the sacred bodies

and you remember

© 2011 Desert Dreamer

Author's Note

Edited into a new format.

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Goodbye

Oh so yummy are your words strung together!

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Adam :P

wow this one also good. you are a very good writer

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Nimbus Thread

Excellent reference to natures power in the brevity of the DAda form. The last line...hand cedar the sacred bodies...recalls the ancient and how we are all tied to natures primal coarse.

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Tony

Ah yes, remembrance--
awakening that primal bond with the healing power of plants and earth.

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The Rock And Roll Cowbo..

That's a charming little poem... it makes me think of how nature has greater healing powers then medicine.

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Jibey

healing plants, dreams, sacred bodies... a pleasing combination

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Robin

vision in a mystical mist

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Dane Osborne

Beautiful and enchanting. So much done with so little. Well done. 100/100

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Added on December 6, 2010
Last Updated on July 26, 2011
Tags: poetry, dada, plants, goddess
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December 6, 2010

Experimental Short Poems

Blue Goddess

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Sonoran Desert, AZ

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