Little Makes Me (More Forlorn)

a distich couplet

Little makes me more forlorn

Than being told how I should mourn

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

Reviews

[bred Brick Keshner]

Here, here Jim… you can mourn in any colour of choice as long as it’s a shade of sable or ebony🕊🙏🏻

[Lydia Shutter]

Great couplet....no one can tell you how to mourn. There is no time table and there is no "right" way. Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much. Yeah, the time and way to mourn are very individual. ~Jim