Barb This Heart of Mine

Barb This Heart of Mine

A Poem by Desert Knave
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a distich couplet valentine

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Crikey, it'll barb this heart of mine
If you'll not be my Valentine


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave


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Smiling here....crikey? You are so funny, Jim. I take it Barb stole your heart? Lydi**

Posted 5 Days Ago


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Desert Knave

2 Days Ago

Thanks, Lydi. This is actually a kind of dark joke about a stingray barb. COuld not help myself. ~Ji.. read more

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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