Love At First Maybe

A Poem by Desert Knave

(My Baby)

As soon as

She said "Maybe"

I thought "Oh, baby !"

As I was so sure

She would say "No"

I was already

Preparing to go

So as soon as

She said "Maybe"

She was my Baby

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2025

© 2025 Desert Knave

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A.H.	Cute poem this one is. This is light hearted and written cleverly. thanks for sharing. Posted 1 Month Ago Cute poem this one is. This is light hearted and written cleverly. thanks for sharing. 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Light and ashes

lol.
Love? I don't know.
"Maybe."
It could be, "maybe, just maybe."

Crazier things, have happened.

Posted 2 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Vol

Jim,
We are so easy...
Vol

Posted 2 Months Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

2 Months Ago

LOL. Yes, most of us are. ~Jim

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Added on January 27, 2025
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Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ

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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..