Betty Rebecca-Sue

No other cousin will do !

He loves her more

Than his dog loves poo

There ain't no other

Cousin that'll do

He'll marry her too

Once he can buy her

Her first pair of shoes

He loves her more

Than Levi's love blue

His Betty Rebecca-Sue

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024 

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Fun and comical. Does this take place in Arkansas? LoL.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks LOL. Real close to (Ar)kansas ! ~Jim

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i had fun reading this cheeky piece. the rhymes and short lines gives this verse a bounce and it's humour was infectious. as a fellow manic-depressive, i hope you have a good day and i look forward to reading more.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much !! ~Jim