Love-Struck Juvenile
A Poem by Desert Knave
... and his teacher's smile ...
I avoided her eyesFor most of the while But I could not miss Her glorious smile I was a teacher's pet A love-struck juvenile She was my first love Of unrequited style And her memory's stayed With me all this while
Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024
© 2024 Desert Knave
Featured Review
|
So many students have a crush on their teacher at some point during their studies and you have very poetically captured this unrequited love superbly in this succinct gem, Jim. I love that her memory has stayed with you as well as her beautiful smile! Love lives on and never dies! I like this poem very much and thank you for sharing, Jim...
Posted 1 Week Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
1 Week Ago
Thank you so much. I had two major teacher crushes, and this one was the second. ~Jim
|
|
1 Week Ago
Bless... Lovely warm memories of innocent days, Jim. Thank you for sharing...
|
|
Reviews
|
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
|
1 Week Ago
Thank you so much. I had two major teacher crushes, and this one was the second. ~Jim
|
|
1 Week Ago
Bless... Lovely warm memories of innocent days, Jim. Thank you for sharing...
|
|
|
|
Stats
43 Views
1 Review
Added on December 10, 2024
Last Updated on December 10, 2024
Author
Desert KnavePhoenix, AZ
About
I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..
Writing
|