Even More (War)

Yes, even more

Even more killed

Even more gone

How much longer

Can this go on

Even more grief

Even more pain

To not stop this

Would be insane

Even more pride

Even more rage

Will we ever

Turn the page

Even more killed

Even more gone ...

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2023

Author's Note

For Hersh (R.I.P.)

Reviews

[Marie]

Once more, I have to say that I love the repetition of the first two lines of the poem as the final two lines in this awesome and so inspiring poem, Jim. Everyday we live in hope of a new page in the history of our world being turned where light, peace, hope, love, joy, blessings will fill everybody's heart. It's not happening, sadly and even more sadly, I cannot see it happening in the distant future, or even in the near future. I love this anti-warm poem, Jim. I wish everybody could read it, it might change the world, one person at a time... Thank you for writing and for sharing, Jim... Lovely work!
(Deepest sympathy on the crossing over to Spirit of you dear friend Hersh, Jim. Bless you both always, dear friend).

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much. I wrote this right after hearing that a hostage had been found killed. Could not wrap my mind around any of it. ~Jim

[Marie]

Oh, bless you Jim! Any human being with a beautiful heart, mind and spirit could not wrap their mind around the evil which is happening in our world at the moment. Human life no longer means anything. Each human being is disposable and easily replaced by another. What a terrible sad world we live in! Thank you again for sharing, Jim...