A More Submissive Stance

A More Submissive Stance

A Poem by Desert Knave
"

... a diff'rent dance ...

"
I'm wanting
A more exotic get
Than you have allowed yet

I'm craving
A more intimate pact
If I'm allowed to act

I desire
A more submissive stance
Should you allow the dance


Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

© 2024 Desert Knave


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The poet's wishes convey a sense of vulnerability and a desire for deeper exploration within the confines of a relationship, hinting at the complexities of love and connection.

This is a very nice sensual write.... thanks for sharing with us all.
Nicely penned!! -Amy

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much !! ~Jim
Amy R

1 Week Ago

You're welcome


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Reviews

The poet's wishes convey a sense of vulnerability and a desire for deeper exploration within the confines of a relationship, hinting at the complexities of love and connection.

This is a very nice sensual write.... thanks for sharing with us all.
Nicely penned!! -Amy

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Desert Knave

1 Week Ago

Thank you so much !! ~Jim
Amy R

1 Week Ago

You're welcome

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Desert Knave
Desert Knave

Phoenix, AZ



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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..

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