Lipstick Case

I want you

To choose me...

To use me

Then lose me

Before the 

Weekend is done

To choose me

And use me

Just for your fun

I've seen your

Notches and

Want to be one

Your best shot

I will not shun

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

Author's Note

Inspired by the song "Hit Me With Your Best Shot" by Pat Benatar (Lyrics by Eddie Schwartz)

Reviews

[Soren]

Know that song. A brave write that rings with confidence and a love of life at its fullest.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much ! ~Jim

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I like the idea of embracing that kind of relationship...I know what I am getting into, so just do it.
I don't want permanence ....just a weekend and moving on.
j.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks. I was kind of in exactly that mood / mode. ~Jim

[Lydia Shutter]

I love the Pat Benatar song. This does it justice. Love the idea of notches in the lipstick case! Lydi**

[Desert Knave]

Thanks. I love the song myself and just ran with it. ~Jim