The Coming O'Clock

I am dreading

The coming o'clock

And trying to pick

Insomnia's locks

I don't need it 

To be very deep

I just need it

To be some sleep

I am dreading

The coming o'clock

And trying to pick

Insomnia's locks

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

Reviews

[Green]

If you do happen to figure out how to pick that particular lock, would you mind sharing the secret with the rest of us?
You really do start to dread the coming of night (or I guess day, depending on what your schedule is) when you are struggling with insomnia. It can be a very frustrating experience indeed.

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much. Yes, that is a secret I'd happily share. ~Jim

[Patricia Wedel]

It is difficult to Sleep when Angels Weep… Summer days and Thunder Storms… Peace and ❤️.. softly, Pat

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much !! ~Jim