Kobayashi Maru

A Friday night ramble

I'd do that for you

Should you ever ask

Should you take me to task

I'd do that for you

Quite happily too

I'd do that for you

Should it be okay

Should you want it that way

I'd do that for you

Quite willingly too

I'd do that for you

Should you ask me to

Should you drop me a clue

I'd do that for you

Kobayashi Maru

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

Reviews

[nadia dmitri]

After looking up "Kobayashi Maru" it is safe to say I probably won't understand that line! However, the preceding words are so simple yet so loaded. There is a soft desperation to being so devoted to someone that is captured beautifully here. Great work!

[Desert Knave]

Thanks. The Star Trek line was just for the person that inspired this. ~Jim

[Miss Sharon]

Great write my friend. The longer I live the more I am coming to believe that ALL of life is an impossible situation. ~Sharon

[Desert Knave]

Thanks Sharon. Yeah, it does seem like impossible is the new reality. ~Jim

[Arundass TP]

Repitation worked well. Nicely written poem. Enjoyed reading 👍

[Desert Knave]

Thank you !!!