Aftermath

To Lisa

I obsessed on her

Throughout the hour

Relished her scent and sight

Then after math

I would think of her

As I laid awake at night

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2022

Reviews

[Tumi]

short but speaks a lot
obsessed?
i would love it better
if it was love and not obsession
a lovely piece though

[Desert Knave]

Thanks. I am not sure any of my high school thoughts were really "love". ~Jim

[Tumi]

oh really
lol then
thanks for sharing such a lovely piece
it feels nice to read