Embellished

An old poem I wanted to share again

Once relished

now embellished

the fish became a whale

The briefest fling

on summer's wings

turned into the grandest tale

Moments embraced

lightning bugs chased

nothing grandiose or sublime

Yet eventually

it became to me

the essence of a better time

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2014

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

The old ones are the best of us, I think. Like an old friend!

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much !~Jim