Felt It (The Rain)

A rework of an old poem

I felt it today ...

Felt the rain

Where normally

I'd refrain

I hoped it would

Help with the pain

As I have

Always maintained

That it is good

For the brain

I felt it today...

Felt the rain

I hoped it would

Help keep me sane

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

Me and the rain are old friends. There's just something about it that has always comforted me, no matter what I'm going through. Good to see you, Jim!

[Desert Knave]

Thanks, I am glad to run into a familiar name here. ~Jim

[Kelly Scheppers]

Yes, indeed. I still find myself missing the old days of Starlite, with Albert and Tess!

[Thomas W Case]

Rain has such a calming effect. Great work.

[Desert Knave]

Thanks so much ! ~Jim