Pilgrim (January)

Thoughts on my inner-journey in 2024 so far

Not quite halfway back

To halfway back

I'm closer to Jimbo

But still akimbo

Emotionally...

But I don't trust me

Not to let the dream die

In the wink of an eye

Not quite halfway back

To halfway back

Jim Lonsdale Poetry 2024

Reviews

[nadia dmitri]

"Not quite halfway back
To halfway back"

What a heavy and thoughtful line. That feeling of not knowing whether you should turn back or continue because each journey seems difficult. Bravo :))

[Desert Knave]

Thank you so much for your kind comment. ~Jim