Build a Better Trap
A Poem by Desert Knave
I think I need to build A better mouth-trap So I can capture A lot more of my crap Before it leaves my yap
© 2023 Desert Knave
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If you manage to find a method that captures one's fleeting thoughts, which are often more hasty than even the fastest of bunnies, please let me know. I also need to get my hands on something better than a dream-catcher to encapsulate the inspirations I got from my dreams and fleeting moments of the day. Oh! Thinking of all the work I could've made if I had discovered my talent much sooner, or if I wasn't so much of a birdbrain!.. Certainly does tick me off quite a bit.
An entertaining and relatable read, author Desert Knave. Perhaps even a bit ... too relatable.
Posted 11 Months Ago
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11 Months Ago
Thank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around fami.. read moreThank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around family. ~Jim
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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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11 Months Ago
Thank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around fami.. read moreThank you. Lately I find my mouth is much less filtered than it should be ... especially around family. ~Jim
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Added on November 27, 2023
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Desert KnavePhoenix, AZ
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I am in my mid-60's, a manic-depressive, seldom impressive, often recessive poet who loves the ocean, rain, the desert, and playing with rhyme. I am a native Arizonan, a Virgo, and a hair metal fan an.. more..
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