faceless king

for anyone out there

 

Someday Faceless King

 

Forever more, and for eternity

Or until I find you, my other side

My faceless, I vow to seek only thee

No matter how many hearts I have spied

 

Now whether cipher or prince, I care not

Know I that strength comes not by tempr’l size

For in his eyes, I’ll find more strength than thought

This strength means more than any worldly prize

 

Although apart we’ll work together now,

To find that goodness inside ourselves first

Through those old flames we’ll find the broken bough

Together To fill our eternal thirst.

 

If, faceless, shall become the best to love

We shall do all to live eternal above

Author's Note

I mostly want to know if you understand it, but any comment is welcome

Reviews

[Shade]

Poems have different meanings for different people, i suppose you could also ask the question, "How do you understand?".
I do like this though, im not sure if we interpret it diffrently or not, but lots of good material here. I do reccomend continuing your poetry.

[David burrows]

I enjoyed it. I tried to see emaning in it and didn't really succeed. Is it a riddle of sorts?
The MY OTHER SIDE should give me a clue, I think but then I got lost on No matter how many hearts. Is it your soul?

[Justin Tobey]

Beautifully done. I, too, think this is a poem that could be interpreted in many different ways and probably means something different to everybody. This complexity makes it very interesting to read. Well done!

[~crazy Beautiful~]

i agree with the below review, to me this piece had a somehwat harsh flow, difficult to keep your mind into it,but some exceptional words pieced together perfectly
these lines
"If, faceless, shall become the best to love
We shall do all to live eternal above
powerful
Nice work
thank you for entering my contest