~ Your bloody Blood ~

A Poem by Dina Rabah

~ This short poetry is about a young man who loved a woman he could never have. She couldn't be with him because of what he is, a serial killer always hungry for blood and flesh. ~

All you ever had was this

my dear sweet canyon of young blood

I would cut it into shreds

I would dug it deep

I would lavish it until the very last moment

For you ... I would drink it all

To turn it devotional

But all that '' I would '' could cease to be

to never be yours

because you were never mine

So, instead I blew up the candles and was left behind ...

© 2014 Dina Rabah

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YouoweYoupay

This was very dark. Not only in concept and idea but also in the pictures reflected in the reader's mind. Like trying to view a scene through a tunnel or a cave. I could hear the flow of the blood river. A thirsty lover drinking from it. I could see memories that only exist in a dreamer's mind, not in actuality. There is hopelessness. There is dangerous silence. You ended this poem very smoothly but also like an incomplete story. I would like to know more!

But in the second verse I think you meant: "I would (dig) it deep" ?

Ruby-red and creative. You have made human emotions very reachable and easy to taste! Thank you for posting this and keep writing.

-Rain.

Posted 10 Years Ago

Emma Ruth

Fantastically dark; the ending is so poignant. Very well written :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. Much appreciated ^_^

Sami Khalil

A splendid read and write...:)....................

Posted 10 Years Ago

10 Years Ago

Thank you ... very much appreciated. :-)

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......................

Arsh

Poor Folk! I think, he should be hungry for kissing her tears dripping from her beautiful eyes so that she could say, "Your mine n am yours!" Anyway, Impressive poem, write something more on it, Dina!