Lost Humanity

Am I always not good enough…

For the plausible pleasure?!

Should I be surrounded…

By bunch of worthless communities?!

Who seek nothing but trouble...

 

Being spoiled between haters

Among the eagle's wings

Damn this nonsense of jealousy

Unlikely Tearing down those precious bonds

 

And oh…How they copy each other in every way

Leaving no trace of importance behind

To tell upon the next generation

That we accomplished something

Something out of the blue, rarely different

 

Such Humanity breaking up

Falling into the underworld

 

An untamed world

Where no light touches the living

Embracing only dead man's wishes

In which dark wishes are whispering

Through endless tracks of time

To the one and only

Who would collide you

With such evil as death

 

Yielding to terror

Pleasing wrong kings

Indulging but Never reassuring their belief

For life itself has been always and forever

An outrageous gift!!!

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[YouoweYoupay]

The question was a good start, it pulled my attention to this piece. Even without adding punctuation, the author's frustration can be felt,

"An untamed world
Where no light touches the living
Embracing only dead man's wishes"

-I liked the contrasting life and death here. They make strong distinctions between colors.

"Indulging but Never reassuring their believe" I think you meant: 'belief', this line speaks of hypocricy, to me as a reader, at least. I felt ur anger about how superficially we humans translate important things in life.

Your use of words is strange...unlike what I read here on writerscafe, and your free style is lacking rhymes yet still flows with semi-ease. According to what I remember reading of your work earlier, I see a a couple of jumps to higher levels and more flexibility. Nevetheless, keep aimning higher! And always share your mind and heart with us.

-youoweyoupay