After Tonight

I love the sounds you make when your loving me.

 

Every breath you take I take in you.

 

It's getting rough, but its not like us to turn away.

 

We will go at it head on.

 

I love the breaths you take when im loving you.

 

The way you say my name that way.

 

Nothing I like more then the way you do what you do.

 

You got something in your eyes.

 

It's that look you get when things are great.

 

Follow me and you won't be lost.

 

When we make the love right, I don't need to look to the sky.

 

The twinkle is in your eye.

 

I love the way you do what you do.

 

The breaths you take, the breaths I take, sounds we make.

 

Music to my ears, the sounds I cherish.

 

Come to me tonight, no one will ever know.

 

I will leave you satisfied, for all the time.

 

No need to hide.

 

I know after tonight, at the end of the night our love is alright.

 

We don't need to look up at the stars, we just look at each other.

 

Our love is alright.

 

I love how you say what you say, how you breathe the way you breathe.

 

All I know is this pain is a good pain.

 

The way I'm making you feel.

 

After tonight you won't ever forget this night.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Interesting. I definitely felt the power in this write. The act of making love is a beautiful, yet such a sacred act all in itself. Only meant for two people, though could be shared with others. But I feel it's only meant for two people alone. It helps them get to know one another better on a more physical level along with a mental level. It's a type of art that's so different from anything else nowadays. It's very personal, very special type of bonding between two people, bringing them closer together, helping them become one.

[Derek Smith]

Thank you. Also I agree. It should be between two people.

[Shaquana Adams]

The emotion in this poem is astounding.

"We don't need to look up at the stars, we just look at each other.

Our love is alright.

I love how you say what you say, how you breathe the way you breathe.

All I know is this pain is a good pain.

The way I'm making you feel.

After tonight you won't ever forget this night."

Very nice job! :)

[Derek Smith]

Thanks I'm glad you liked it

[Shaquana Adams]

Anytime :)

[emilyfulken]

wow, this poem is definitely another excellent write. Amazing how you can write poem after poem so very well. your readers cans sense the emotions coming from your words. that is a powerful trait when writing. being able to hook your readers in and having them feel the words you write flow thru. great job.

[Derek Smith]

that means a lot, im glad you think they are at least decent quality :)

[emilyfulken]

trust me, they are very good. thank you for sharing them.

[Derek Smith]

:) thank you again