I wont ever lose

not much of a poem just feeling motivated

I won't ever lose.
It won't matter what you put me through.
I'm not guna lose.
I will train; bring the pain.
It's time to dedicate; I will decimate.
My good will be better than most of every ones great.
Go ahead and try and take me fate.
I will teach, I will preach, everything is in reach.
You brought out the monster in me; and now here's your fee.
You'll see the best in me.
I wont ever lose.

Reviews

[Dye]

I like the concept of this piece. No matter what life throws at you, you overcome it. That's how I read it at lease. Very nice Derek.

[Derek Smith]

thanks it was just a motivated thought lol

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

I can relate to the content of this, in that it is almost like a mute bird finally finding his voice to sing. We can be beaten down, and sometimes in our darkest moments we find the brightest of lights. A few typographical errors "guna" should be "gonna" (or "going to"), and "My good will be better than everyone's great" --I would take out the "most of"--little things like that, but overall, I get the sense of what you are saying, and I say bravo to you!

[Derek Smith]

Well it should be gonna not guna and it sounds better than going to. And also it's more of a thought than poem but thanks it was helpful