POLLUTION

"I was told that I should turn this ink bleed into a movie..lol"

Behind me

the assemblage was deafening

shaking the Earth- many inclinations

...a colorful sea

blossoms abroad, the chisel plagued minds

there is no such word as ''proud''

no speeches to end, no musings

in sleek streams



..The streets are naked- like a new-sprung

no contemporary races through there minds...



Where are you...

when I was imperfect

when I was throttling

when my wings vanished



Tears flying down, pelting through the air

my breath hanging on the threshold of time...



I watched it slide down through my fingers

...alteration renamed itself to non-achievement

stepping on needle like pointed rocks... the seashore

displeased, its waves wandering alongside high tide



Skies flipped over billowing hillside

Sheer haughtiness flowed from bone over-lay

and the distance poured of blackness, a withdrawal

of eternal passion studded itself over scaling walls



Buildings came crumbling down, like war-time

hundreds of years, and no detection of peace could

be seen... the convexity of circling eyes, tongue tied

themselves over twisted realizations...



Some picked the pavement up, and shook it like a rug

debris flying every which way- the ears of a sun

fell to the ground shaped like dull swords, the flesh of

you stripped from the cognition, the mind melted like putty



People stood in awe...

the world dissolving before there visage

empathy floating in contaminated waters, green aqua lay stagnant

bodies head down in undecided tar, feathers scattered like clout





by Karen D. 2011 (c)

Reviews

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Deep words within this write. Honest truth. Really enjoyed this read. Nicely done.

[Amila Jay]

Very much in depth, the truth is bleeding!! Awesome write:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

this is a deep reality
..sad but true..
=]

[Coyote Poetry]

So many visions create by your words. When we see the real world and the damage being done. Can be a sad world. So many statements stood out in your poem. I like the ending. A real world ending. With photos could make a powerful statement. A excellent poem.
Coyote