He's Gone
A Poem by Lilia
His lips. My lips.
His hands. My hips.
His words. My life.
His words. His lies.
My eyes. My tears.
His lies. My fears.
My love. His "love."
My life, he's gone.
© 2017 Lilia
Author's Note
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Sorry these are so bad, I just need to clear my head.
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Reviews
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This is outstanding. The use of line breaks, rhyme, and repetition make this an extremely effective piece. 10/10, would read again. Awesome job.
Posted 7 Years Ago
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Lilia - With so little so much is said. Very nicely done. Namyh
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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sometimes love hurts,enjoyed the write
Posted 7 Years Ago
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The poem is really good..
Posted 7 Years Ago
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!!! so sorry ,good poem
you are amazing writer
Posted 7 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 26, 2017
Last Updated on May 26, 2017
Tags: depressed, breakup, broken, depression, promise, promises, heart, love, lover, forgotten, brokenpromise, brokenpromises, lies, death, cry, crying, sobbing, grave, lovers, end, ending
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LiliaWI
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