He's Gone

He's Gone

A Poem by Lilia

His lips.
My lips.

His hands. 
My hips.

His words.
My life.

His words.
His lies.

My eyes.
My tears.

His lies.
My fears.

My love.
His "love."

My life,
he's gone.

© 2017 Lilia


Author's Note

Lilia
Sorry these are so bad, I just need to clear my head.

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This is outstanding. The use of line breaks, rhyme, and repetition make this an extremely effective piece. 10/10, would read again. Awesome job.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lilia - With so little so much is said. Very nicely done. Namyh

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sometimes love hurts,enjoyed the write

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The poem is really good..

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

!!! so sorry ,good poem
you are amazing writer

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lilia

7 Years Ago

Thanks John

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Added on May 26, 2017
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Tags: depressed, breakup, broken, depression, promise, promises, heart, love, lover, forgotten, brokenpromise, brokenpromises, lies, death, cry, crying, sobbing, grave, lovers, end, ending

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Lilia

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