He's Gone

His lips.

My lips.

His hands. 

My hips.

His words.

My life.

His words.

His lies.

My eyes.

My tears.

His lies.

My fears.

My love.

His "love."

My life,

he's gone.

Author's Note

Sorry these are so bad, I just need to clear my head.

Reviews

[cbastien]

This is outstanding. The use of line breaks, rhyme, and repetition make this an extremely effective piece. 10/10, would read again. Awesome job.

[Namyh]

Lilia - With so little so much is said. Very nicely done. Namyh

[wordman]

sometimes love hurts,enjoyed the write

[Suzanah]

The poem is really good..

[Serendipity Planet]

!!! so sorry ,good poem
you are amazing writer

[Lilia]

Thanks John