My Pain vs. The Real Me

My Pain vs. The Real Me

A Poem by Intelligent love
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Pain to me brings out the artistic side in all of us.

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My life, a nightmare of drama

And utter despair

The pain I have hidden inside

My soul

Tucked away with a lock and a key

So that no one can enter.

 

I trust no one,

Because if I did, then I would have

To face the point of betrayal and defeat

The lies Whispered in my ear

The fakeness of others behind my back.

 

I've walked alone in a maze my whole life

That I still can't find which way is the

Right way to turn

The pain I feel inside is unbearable

 

Many look in my eyes and judge me

I hide my emotions with a fake smile, but

Deep inside I'm hoping,

Someone can see and help me

Out of my misery.

 

But no one can see my pain

No one will understand exactlyhow i feel!

My pain is the only thing I can

Call a friend

It may hurt me,

But it will stay by my side .

It's able to see

The real me.

© 2012 Intelligent love


Author's Note

Intelligent love
This was my very first poem. And I hope you enjoy it.

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This is deep, emotional and quite sad.
Whatever it is that you're going through,
Whatever it is that you've been through,
Whatever it is that troubles you,
Whatever it is that you feel,
You got to learn to be strong,
you got to defeat the storm.
Look at yourself and see the best of yourself.
Don't criticise yourself. Learn to praise yourself more.
Because if you don't put yourself first, nobody will.
See, nurture and embrace all the good qualities about you.
Qualities like your writing, creative Literary skills,
your ability to read and write,
your cute and unique face, your Black Beauty;
or perhaps if you can dance and sing, as long as you got the passion.
Also push yourself to be the best in all that you do.
Appreciate everything about yourself.
Don't let people determine your Happiness.
You must determine your own joy and happiness.
You don't have to live just to please others.
Let people accept you on your own terms.
KEEP IT REAL ALWAYS.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Intelligent love

Stone Mountain , GA



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