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Now that is love!

Now that is love!

A Story by Abd-afeez
"

love can be so complicated

"
I heard a sound behind me, i
glanced back and noticed a dry
leaf on the floor. I moved back
pulling little demmy with me.
The leaf was a delight as it
crumbles in my grasp. I released the debris and the soft
harmattan wind dispersed it
away. I then found one flat
exposed root, sat little demmy
there and got myself a little
brick to sit on just opposite him. The everly attentive
demmy submitted ears as i gave
him a detailed answer to his
inquest.
The world is filled with
zillions of existence; myriads, mega, living, non-living,
natural and the super natural.
If you should move through
their vastness, you'll discover
the distinct; 'the human form'.
Humans stand extraordinary with his outstanding web of
thoughts, ideology, creativity
and emotions. Amazingly, these
four attributes are controlled
by two masterpieces; totally
encaged. The master pieces being the brain and the heart.
While the brain is the master
of the first three attributes,
the heart is the master of the
fourth attribute.
Now the heart is the most protected of the human body.
First by the ribcage and second
by the myocardium, with the
the broad chest muscle giving
it the third shield. Yet, while
the heart physically perform the most mechanical of the
human's autonomic activities,
it still handle our emotions
and this is my concern.
So the array of emotions in our
body carry so much uncertainty. Now you can be
excited but not anxious, you
may like something and know
not, or just be sad and never
cry. I can sternly affirm no
one is ever sure what emotions you'll show at an instance, it
is only a factor of what your
heart can accede to at that very
instance. So what overwhelms
your heart take over your
emotions, as your passion for such thing soars so much
boisterity to keep the emotions
flowing.
Here is my story:
ordinarilly, i always doubt
my emotions and thats because they are not hearty enough.
Sometimes its your mind, or
your greed, or your hormones
that soars your emotions.
However this is not regarded as
real emotions but fantasies, desires, or instincts and are
often temporary and hardly
overwhelming. However if you
notice these little changes
such as i felt, am sure you'll
understand what love really is;
The first being the fact that
you'll hardly have time to
think before you act.
The second being you'll know
you are presently gaining nothing but you are excited
about it.
The third being you'll be
ready to sacrifice almost
anything for your partner.
The fourth being you'll always have broadest of
feelings mumbled together. So
in a day, you'll feel almost
everyway you could ever feel.
You'll be excited in a moment
the next you are sad., and next be anxious and followed by
feeling disappointed, you'll
be morose in a moment and the
next conceited; all depending
on how your partner feels or is
at a particular moment. If you've found yourself feeling
these ways? Now that is love.
I glanced at my watch alarmed
that we've spent a whooping 45
minute, i swivelled my eyes to
peek at demmy who was teeming with lots of questions. 'Don't
worry my boy, i'll answer you
on the way' i calmed him. We
then walked back home as the
sun set behind us.

© 2012 Abd-afeez


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I felt like this piece was written by releasing feelings straight from your heart, you let your pen interpret them without too much thinking, That's how I felt because it spoke to my feelings directly, interesting point of view on love, the imagery was terrific.

Posted 12 Years Ago


I don't know. Love to me is like a hurricane. Can stop the hurricane. Must roll with it. I like the set-up of the poem. Allow the reader to fall into the thoughts and desire of the writer. I like the ending to the excellent tale of love and thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Abd-afeez
Abd-afeez

Ibadan, Nigeria



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Am just so creative and prolific. Am from south western nigeria. And am currently studying biochemistry. i really love the science world. Here you see a piece of ink on paper and on it you see result .. more..

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