am ur baby

love pets a man's soul

White spread tinted with darkness,
cumulus densness in overwhelming
overcast,
you and me just wait for the rain,
as gentle wind blow up on our faces.
But the rain, nor the wind,
nor its whiz,
in this immense breeze,
can take my eyes off you,
i'll hold your hands,
and stay by your side, i'll look into your eyes,
and tell you i'd die for you.
As the rain drops down,
i'll hold you closer,
under the rain,
we'll never shudder, then i'll whisper in your ears,
even if the earth blazes,
my dear you'll never sweat,
i promise my servitude to our love,
i relinquish a doubt for what my heart
feels. As soft thunder breaks,
i'll cry in your hold,
begging to be owned,
though am a man i know,
but now am your baby you know

Reviews

[Clarisse Nanoit]

WOW. This is one of the best love poems I've ever read. This is an amazing testament to love, and I SOOO loved the picture it painted in my head. "I promise my servitude to our love, I relinquish a doubt for what my heart feels." WOW. I just love it. Beautifully written!
KH