A note of rubbish 3.

Forget the title and feel the humour. Its scary a bit but funny in all.

If i still have ink in my pen,
Am still gonna stain my paper in dirt,
Oh ye! you got to reject this nonsense,
Because am gonna play on ur patience,
Ha ha ha! i can see you growing so much fear,
High above the sky you can only find few birds,
Why! because nature select,
And then! only a few could fly there,
Now is time to hit the road in tens,
Where to! to go get a mess cleared,
why! its been long its been lingering there,
and then! its got to varnish from there,
Ha ha ha! see the lazy one hiding in bed,
But then! the mess is a bunch of gift items,
And so! all we wanna do is go share,
Ha ha ha! emptiness the lazy one will sure get,
Oops! it seems i have hit a dead end,
And so! for my next rubbish i got to prepare,
What! ur still hanging there?
So just! hit the road men.

Reviews

[Simone]

I really enjoyed reading this poem, it has an unusual twist and a very personalised style- making it feel as if the author's words are dirrected just to you alone.
Great use of grammer and an amazing ending.
Over all, a great job.