Its all just mere dreams

When you make so much strife in life, and you get nothing worthwhile.

Life is a mystery unsolved
For its many turns can leave you deformed
So many life options i took on
But i ended up with nothing at all
When i seek out for true love
And all i get is haters from beyond
And they came into my world with a rush
And left it with a devastating mark on
When i searched for wealth in this world
All i get is penury in deep form
From job to job i kept debt up
And i swam and couldn't get off
When i search for idea i did get some
But no one has got my trust
And they entrust my ideas with absolute failure
And now am left with little option
Only if life could be the suture
And with some few pieces of stuffs joined up
You can build one great future
And every one will see you as an icon
But i dreamt to be one
But here i am not close enough
Very far off it i got stuck
So what everyone tells me now ring a bell
Its all just mere dreams
Life bits we want to make real
And make flourishing like a big tree
But what a pity
It has all crumbled to pieces.

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

You paint a powerfully vivid portrait of the anxiety and pain of life that can hinder us from fulfilling our dreams. So well written and profoundly voiced!