Lost

In a world strange i took my place.

Now am sitting all alone, drifting into this world unknown, so many mystery were unfold, and so many stories are to be told.............this place is so strange, and now am so astray, getting stuck out here is what i hate, so am searching for way to escape................now its seems like am in captivity, rid of senses i end up with futile activities, this place is so void of reality, so i gotta avoid taking it with levity..............its such a world of shades, one of the world darkest place, so there they are just like bait, in those corners they awaits............ In their hands lies my fate, and i gotta do whats most sane, try to avoid these things in rage, so i can return fully the same........... now am really feeling something ghostly, in this place that smells nasty, the experience is just so sour, and i wanna get out in an hour........but am lost!, where do i head for?, can't trace where i come from, don't know when my saviour will come..................now i gotta keep a trail of survival, in this world so medieval, such a trial, such i won't want another time............then the nucturnal ones drift by, catching me in that my trance, now am looking blank, don't know what to do at an instance.............now am looking for a way out, and i remember those i left behind, have i lost my mind?, why d i leave them like that.............so now the sun was rising, and then came from the creature of the dark, comes a crazy dash of avoidance, whats it with them and light?................he is such a sluggish one, and he ended up caught in the sun, and his soft skin got peeled, i just couldn't stand his fits, i ended up screaming at this..........now i jerked out of my bed sheet, so it has only be a nasty dream, all through the years i remember it, and i have come to love my world for real.

Reviews

[Ahmad Alhour]

Pretty good, simple and strangely formed !
Its like you got this one thought but you can't flow with the verses yet to present it...

[LostinKristina]

This is formatted strangely.
But It was a good write.
I think if you fromatted it differently though it would appeal to a lot more people.

[Martina]

The way you format your poems is strange......good bye the way!!