And then he enters.

Just by chance beyond expectation lets see how brown got his problem solved.

He sit alone in despair. He look at his rough shoe lace. He nod his head in great sympathy. His stomach stings with hunger. It has been 5 month ago since he last had a full happy day. He entered his office that day the usual happy self he was. He passed by his secretary and he seemed bothered by his grumbly reply. He moved on to his chair and settled for the days job. And Then he entered. The messenger dropped a note for him. It was a sack letter. He couldn't believe it. He has been so diligent and he wouldn't expect being caught up in this. A necessary restructuring make this inevitable! says his boss. He left office head down with full sadness. It has been five month he has been fighting to survive. Today has been so tough having not eaten anything since morning. he got a bad news of an application rejection. Too much for him to bear. ........and then he enters again. This same messenger with another brand new note. It a reinstatement letter. Wow! What a relief. Another necessary expansion is a reason for this. Says his boss. What an irony!

Reviews

[Drew Wade]

I think you need to work on your tenses in this writing. Also I think this would be more forceful if you used proper nouns instead of the pronouns all the way through, because they can get confusing. I also think you should explain the situation better and drop the last sentence. I'm sorry if this sounds too harsh, I'm not trying to be, just trying to help you get the most out of your writing.