Smokescreen

a cautuoning

Smoke screen

I see a legion of men,
Amidst which chaos spread,
I see the redundancy they bred,
The evil they bled.
Illuminations with killing edges
Orchestrated in carnages with no end.
Ocean of blood ending in rivulets,
Met by seas of tears.
A dense atmosphere that read,
"Doom is in the air."

Men and their ignorance,
Where hide their insights?
Men playing gods on earth,
Ruling with a devil-right-hand.
Tell them to be careful,
Tell them their ends pend.
Tell them that which they never learned;
That there is no smokescreen in heaven.
The sovereign eyes watches,
And It shall judge with no mercy.

Reviews

[Richard Layne]

Very powerful. I love the last 3 lines.

[hayzed]

Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better caption. Good bro

[hayzed]

Wow. I see where you're coming at. A better capture. Good bro

[Abd-afeez]

thanks so much for coming by

[TL Boehm]

The sovereign eyes watch and shall judge with no mercy. Men who play gods. This is a powerful write.

[Abd-afeez]

thanks for the review. it's very much appreciated