BROKEN

My heart is sinking now!

BROKEN

My heart sank, my eyes cried with a drip,

My mind lost count of the lovely days gone deep,

Loving you was heavenly felt,

Leaving me made my heart melt.

 

The wishes we made became our strength,

Only to realize that fate separated us by a bigger width,

To leave me in the cold, struggling with the dark,

With the lonely spirits haunting my soul with a spark.

 

I cannot tell how it came to be so ugly,

What we shared it’s now a past s****y,

Memories dazzling in the clouds,

Seeing it rain leaves my head with shattered sounds.

 

Broken is my flicking heart,

With bruises all over its skirt,

Now I have to find a tailor,

To mend this slyly, torn heart from a failure.

   

Author's Note

My heart was broken by a particular girl, so I thought you would it appealing.

Reviews

[apennylate]

*Welcome to "Pure Rhymes" Thanks for joining, great to have you...!*

A tailor to fix my broken skirt of a heart... Beautiful imagery... Shattered sounds among clouds... My failing head a... A sly write, my friend... We have all been here, and you captured that moment quite well here...

[Dennis N. K]

Thanks friend, happy you loved it!

[apennylate]

Most def, you are welcome

[Neville]

A romantic rap springs to mind, yeah a romantic rap with a broken heart...................Neville

[marilyn 1225]

a heart broken is a human shot the wounds are so critical yet we can not go to the er .hospital
instead we write about it
suffering pain that at times can be hell

[Dennis N. K]

Yeah I totally agree with you

[matelotrod]

I'm not too sure what type of tailor it takes to repair broken hearts. Very interesting poem Dennis I will read more of your work when I get more familiar with how this outfit operates. Rod.

[Dennis N. K]

Haha... I am not in the mood to laugh though you made me laugh... I only used a tailor to express that the heart is torn and needs to be mend.