Up in October Smoke

Up in October Smoke

A Poem by Dennis Shanaberg
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A requiem for the last days before winter

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Smokestacks burn into the October air.

The leaves fall down, the trees are nearly bare.

The birds fly south, barely notice or seem to care.

Jack-o’-lantern fires, all the kids act so scared.


And I know that November’s coming.

The chill and flakes of white.

Angry Winter’s on his way

With teeth sharpened and ready to bite.

Oh-I know that November’s coming.

Grey skies o’er the fireside.

Old Man Winter’s on his way.

With harmful winds, we forget the days gone by.

© 2010 Dennis Shanaberg


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love how you personify the feeling of October.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Old Winter is coming very quickly. Time to wear warm jackets and watch the turning of the leaves. A very good poem. Halloween bring on the cold of winter and create desires for the warm days of spring before winter takes hold. I like the last lines. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on October 22, 2010
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Dennis Shanaberg
Dennis Shanaberg

Mentor, OH



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