Sure Fire Quick Start

Ever wish that love could be quick and sure...yeah...

If I was ever a spark,
I’m about to go out.
I can’t figure out your head
What all this “talkin’s” all about.

You’ve got me livin’ shambles,
And I don’t know what that means.
So, I just sit and kinda ramble.
Since this feelings seems obscene.
There’s this beat in my heart
That goes down to my toes.
And when i think of you,
I think that everyone knows.

I wanna quick start
Surefire way
To something good.
I wanna start quick
Make sure
This is what we should.
I wanna quick start, sure fire
Quick fire, sure start.

You think in sparks and fires,
And yet you call me dangerous.
But I’m really not all that bad,
Though, like Hell, I wish I was.
You’ve got me feeling tired,
‘Cuz I’m up writing love songs,
But the ending are never sure
And the imagery is all wrong.

I wanna quick start
Surefire way
To something good.
I wanna start quick
Make sure
This is what we should.
I wanna quick start, sure fire
Quick fire, sure start.

We are all alone in the world,
And for two to find the other is absurd.
But for us time and space have curled.
So, let’s make this work; just say the word.

I wanna quick start
Surefire way
To something good.
I wanna start quick
Make sure
This is what we should.
I wanna quick start, sure fire
Quick fire, sure start.

Reviews

[StoryTailor]

This is good. I like it. There are a few parts that are a bit sketchy... But that's normal. Overall you did great with it. It's a curious piece.

[lindsay]

I love the chours, like a lot. This reminds me of your other poem involving fire as well.


We are all alone in the world,
And for two to find the other is absurd.
But for us time and space have curled.
So, let's make this work; just say the word.

That was cute. lol. Great writing, keep it up my friend.