Dualistic Realizations

Rapidly, I repel down ropes

Residing in Rabbit holes--

Resisting realizations--

Relinquishing reality.

Rightfully, I’m rageful

In restricted revery--

Rarely ever restful--

Rapidly arresting.

Cardiac Explosion

Mentally Imploding

Dissected Psychic Sanity

Or Blissful in banality…

Deadliest Derision

Is daily Indecision--

Dangerous Division--

Dualistic our Delusions.

So drab in dank Darkness

diving to demonic depths

Or Delighting in dumb dalliance

Of derided dapper days.

Reviews

[Oyindamola Shoola]

I love the alliteration...this is a really good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

"Rightfully, I’m rageful
In restricted revery--
Rarely ever restful--
Rapidly arresting"
This is very good poetry. The above lines were my favorite. I like the use of language and direct description in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Moonie]

The alliteration keeps the flow going. It is amazing to see so many instances of alliteration in the same poem. A brilliant write. =))

[Ma'at]

i love the alliteration and rhyme you included in this poem, it is absolutely fascinating and makes the reader want to continue reading. good job
-GS