Celestial Lover

She reached into the darkness

’N’ removed handfuls of me.

It took a fair long while,

Before I was then complete.

She shook off all the shadows

That were clinging to my skin.

Her eyes blazed with bright sunshines

That made me whole again.

I hate the days

When she’s away

Cuz I am

Invisible

In the dark.

I am the moon

That reflects

The beauty

That blazes out

From her.

Nothing in the universe

Or all all creation-wide

Could match the spark and shine

In her ever glowing eyes.

Her body is celestial.

It has on me such a pull

That’s transformed my very mind.

My heart is rising at high tide.

Reviews

[SquinklaPsyOps]

Reading this and the way you have constructed it, makes craving for more, especially to take an idea and creating it into something quite amazing while managing to tell the story well. Great work.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the beautiful poem. The strong description took me to places of beauty and create good vision.
"Invisible
In the dark.
I am the moon
That reflects
The beauty
That blazes out
From her."
Thank you for the amazing poetry. The above lines are my favorite.
Coyote

[Oyindamola Shoola]

romantic, good sense of imagery, I like the way you put the second stanza especially... and I love the last line; my heart is rising at high tide...nice one and thanks for sharing

[Dennis Shanaberg]

Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for commenting