Chaotic Sanctuary

A song I wrote...not too sure about it yet.

What's left for me?

Shards of broken hopes-chaotic sanctuary...

My legacy,

an abyss of unfullfilled life long dreams...

I'm just a ghost to humanity,

I'm just a nightmare of vanity.

Phasing in and out of the day to day,

I'm only here until I go away...

Apocalypse upon my lips,

and broken ribs beneath the rips,

dismembered sloth and shredded cloth,

falling with my faith aloft...

No place to be,

from ashes to unsettled dust I return.

My memory,

is as hollow and empty as this life.

I'm just a ghost to humanity,

I'm just a nightmare of vanity.

Phasing in and out of the day to day,

I'm only here until I go away...

And death is all,

that can validate this empy life...

Reviews

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Something new!
It's short, but I like it.
Maybe you'll think of more to add.
As a song though, I think it could very well stand as it is.
Very cool.

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".