The fear of the unknown

The fear of the unknown

A Poem by Miss Britni
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A Poem i wrote not to long ago, when i finally started writing again after 6 months of not writing.

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I Should just go into the mouth of the unknown,
To release the anchors within my uneasy soul,
That tie me to the same place where i have no control,
Where i tend to lose what's within my soul.

By, Britni

© 2013 Miss Britni


Author's Note

Miss Britni
It's hard for me to write long poems.

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Thank the both of you, i appreciated the good feedback, i honestly havent wrote in months i miss it, but i just blank out trying to write nowadays

Posted 10 Years Ago


Here is a poem that one can relate to. We have all felt this way at one point or another. Also, I'd like to add that a long poem is not always preferable. Personally, some of the most memorable pieces I have read are short and sweet. Just something to remember in case you ever start stressing about not writing longer ones. Thank you for sharing this. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well, that's a great talent i think you can't write bcoz i believe that Poems mean "convert your feelings, your views into your own words... but in a short forms". I liked your this Author's Note too. You've to go on with your this talent of short writings... I'd love to read your some more stuffs now.
Your this write's great, by the way, last two lines're deep and powerful I must say. Don't give up, just raise your talent. Keep writing.
I'm gonna read your some more stuffs.

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on July 28, 2013
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Miss Britni
Miss Britni

Fostoria, OH



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I'm britni, my mind is very complex, i tend to write poems to help understand my thoughts and feelings. more..

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