Darkness

for a friend

In darkness you come, bringing fear.

In darkness you come, bringing pain.

In darkness you come,bringing humilation.

In darkness you come,chasing away all sadness.

In darkness you come,chasing away all light.

In darkness you come,chasing away all reason.

I follow you with out question.

I follow you with conviction.

I follow you with devotion.

So I wait for darkness to come.

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, the ending brings this poem togther in a powerful way,
I really thought the repitition worked well, which is hard to do,
captured in such a sweet sorrow, your words are gripping, nicely done.