Diabolus

Forgetting everything that it was all worth
Seeing a light through a new form of darkness
Deception and raped perfection
Powers of the prowess...
To draw us closer into what feeds
Biting the hand that we need
Leaving us dead for this new breed

Generation and after f*****g generation
The beast takes another bite of the hand
Swallowing the blood and skin
Eventually it'll be nothing
But an arm that cannot reach

Maybe I'm in too deep
Decieved...
Maybe this is all I can keep
This evil need

Crushing everything that was good
A path that winds into the fiery entrance
To venture forth, no soul should
As it was warned by the ghost of Dante
"Abandon all hope ye who enter here"

But I'm already here, and there is no hope for me
Listen to me closely and I speak...
For that my voice rasps...
Everyday I'm slipping away
No sanity for me...
I see a smile in my mind

F**k you...
Sincerely...
Satan

Reviews

[Passingdaze]

Very well crafted. The evil within these lines is pulsing and set to overflow. Everything is set up perfectly leading to a chaotic ending that made my eyes roll back in my head and the devil horns salute. METAL!!! I guess that means I enjoyed it quite a bit. Good job...Keep up the fantastic writing. Once again...METAL!!!

[Arthur Crow]

Mmmm, this is my kind of poetry. I was enchanted by the imagery and beautiful wickedness of your lines. Quite a lot of careful thought and scructure here to make this piece work very well.

[deeps]

Wow! Such a powerful write of emotion
Well written and straight out forward
I like this alot.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow so wickedly intense and honest... evil is everywhere and it is in the form of people who crave power, money and lust... and as always the devil is behind it all praying on the gift of free will we were givin... I think of the song Shout At The Devil by Motley Crue when I read this.

[Tears Forgotten]

Very blunt.... Amazing... fully, and complete with truth and edge... nice.....

[Legion]

Is that anyway to talk to a friend? ;)

This is exemplarary (not sure I spelled that right). I was in awe. Deep. Dark. Chaotic. And a straight up "up yours" at the end to boot. Well done. Wish I'd written it. Bravo.